Empty Sky Haibun

Haibun was created by the great Japanese haiku poet, Matsuo Bashō (1644-1694). His greatest and most famous haibun, The Narrow Road Through the Deep North, is his account of a 156-day journey that began in the spring of 1689. Haibun usually takes the form of a laconic yet descriptive travelogue, puncuated with haiku: the haibun presented here is also the account of a journey, though unlike Bashō, I won’t be making this one on foot.

Tuesday, October 04, 2005

The Three-line Stanza

Contrary to Kerouac’s suggestion, the three-line stanza is hardly essential. As Nobuyuki Yuasa writes in the introduction his translation of Bashō’s The Narrow Raod to the Deep North, haiku “consists of seventeen syllables, divided into three sections of five-seven-five.” Yuasa, however, translates haiku into English using a four-line stanza because haiku is “based on colloquialism, . . . the closest approximation of natural conversational rhythm can be achieved in English by a four-line stanza rather than the constrained three-line stanza.” He also did not attempt to restrict his translations to seventeen syllables. Thus, Bashō’s most famous haiku [Furuike ya, kawazu tobikomu, mizu no oto] is rendered as:

Breaking the silence
Of an ancient pond,
A frog jumped into the water—
A deep resonance.

3 Comments:

At 3:56 PM, Blogger Unknown said...

You have many interesting blogs!! :)

 
At 2:11 AM, Blogger steve said...

Great blog--love the words and images. This resparks my interest in poetry and prose.

 
At 6:45 AM, Blogger Brad said...

I've also heard this one translated as:

an old pond!
a frog jumps in,
the sound of water

 

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